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3.08, posted 22nd May 2018, 8:20 AM, in Chapter 3: Kindred

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khkddn
22nd May 2018, 8:20 AM

What a form. A scary one, some might say.

There should be more real backgrounds here instead of gradients. I'll add them in during summer break, if I remember. And redraw all of chapter 1. I don't think I ever mentioned it anywhere but I intend to do that too! Many things to draw in the summer, which will be here soon, but the next three pages or so will suffer

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd May 2018, 8:47 AM

Nope! Go back to baby-form plz!

Also, I don’t necessarily think you need to add in (more backgrounds) for these pages if you didn’t have time. They all look sufficiently atmospheric and interesting. But you should of course do what you feel is best. :)

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khkddn
22nd May 2018, 9:02 AM

The baby, despite its faults, might be better than this!

It probably stands out more to me because only I know what it would look like with more details. The triangular panels can get away with it I think but the bottom left panel could use a little more.

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dubiz senju
22nd May 2018, 9:55 AM

That was a scary morphing...
I think redrawing the first chapter is something most artists probably want to do for their comics so if you have the time, you should go for it

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khkddn
22nd May 2018, 10:09 AM

Redrawing might take a while, but I think improving the anatomy and perspective in the beginning will make things easier for new readers.

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MK_Wizard
22nd May 2018, 10:09 AM

That is even more scary than the baby ghost one and way creepier. The question is, why?

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khkddn
22nd May 2018, 10:21 AM

He might be less scary if there was no rope or bloody cloth. Without that he could be a normal guy!

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snuffysam
22nd May 2018, 10:30 AM

Honestly I think the baby form is creepier. After all, that is a... criminal who was hanged, i guess? just pretending to be a baby and hanging out with some kids. Kind of weird.

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khkddn
22nd May 2018, 11:05 AM

Alternatively: a bunch of teenagers kidnapped a man whose ghostly form looks like a baby

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notkamalayx
22nd May 2018, 11:25 AM

many comments already addressed roswell's human form (which i love,) so i'm just going to point out theo's face. please look at it everyone, i'm dying of laughter asdkljfds

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khkddn
22nd May 2018, 11:36 AM

He's had enough of the windy powers.

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CNightJoy
22nd May 2018, 1:31 PM

Woah he is huge! I kind of miss his cute form tho

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khkddn
22nd May 2018, 4:29 PM

The cute form was much...cuter.

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